Design Summary and Analysis Draft #2
In the article “It’s 2019 – Where’s
My Supersuit?”, Zelik (2019) writes about the remarkable features and the benefits
of the wearable exoskeletons developed by his research team. The main function
of the exoskeletons, which is described as “mechanized clothing” is to reduce
the workload and aid those with spinal injuries by providing a back-support
system. In the earlier years, the disadvantages of the exoskeletons such as
unaffordability and bulkiness cause the design to be less appealing to the
public. The author Zelik describes the design as a vest that consists of common
clothing materials along with the assistive fabric elastic band and a switch
that allows user to turn the suit’s assistance on or off. Once the switch is
turned off, the user will be able to move “freely and fully”. Furthermore, due
to the absence of any motors, batteries and protruding parts, the design makes
the suit portable and seamless. Even though the exoskeletons developed by Zelik
and his research team possess notable features, they are limited to only one application.
Team of researchers from other institutes have created products that have more applications.
One of such products is the “Soft
Robotic Exosuit”. Similar to the exoskeleton developed by Zelik, this
exoskeleton, made by Harvard faculty member Conor Walsh and his team of
researchers, is designed with soft clothing materials to allow the users to
move freely and with little restrictions to their movement. Based on the Wyss
Institute website, the “Soft Robotic Exosuit” is made up of fabrics that are
specially constructed to make it lightweight and provides the least limitation
on the users’ mobility as opposed to the rigid designs introduced by engineers
in earlier years.
There are multiple applications for
the “Soft Robotic Exosuit”. One of them is to provide aid in terms of mobility
for the wearer. The exosuit are installed with onboard micro-processor that “detects the movements of the wearer’s body and
determines both the type of gait (walking or running) and what phase of that
gait the leg is currently in. It gives the leg making the movement a little
boost, making it just that much easier to do it” (Coldeway, 2019, para. 4). A
cable actuation system is also installed right above the hip to “apply a
tensile force between the waist belt and thigh wraps to generate an external
extension torque at the hip joint that works in concert with the gluteal
muscles” (Boettner, 2019, para. 6). According to the techcrunch website,
the suit is able to minimise the effort used
by decreasing the metabolic load of walking and running by percentages of 9.4
and 4 respectively. This allows the wearer to move faster with lesser effort,
thus improving efficiency on movement. With such functions, the physical load
on soldiers, firefighters, paramedics and factory workers will be greatly
reduced. In fact, according to the website from army-technology, the US Army “has
been exploring commercial exoskeleton technologies for potential military
applications, which can be used to support strength and endurance and protect
soldiers from strain injury” (Husseini, 2019, para. 1). The “Soft Robotic Exosuit”
is one of the main options for the military due to its lightweight design and
the system to determine the individual gait mechanics.
Another application is
rehabilitation. The “Soft Robotic Exosuit” is capable of providing mobility
assistance to patients that have movement disorder. Based on the Wyss Institute
website, the mechanical power from the cable actuation system will allow the
suit to supply “gait-restoring forces” to the affected limb of the patient
(Boettner, 2017, para. 7). Due to the exosuit’s assistance, the functional
asymmetry between the disabled leg and non-disabled leg has been reduced.
In
conclusion, the implementation of the technical devices by Walsh and his team has
created more applications as compared to Zelik’s product. Additional features
such as a micro-processor to determine the users’ gait mechanics enable the
“Soft Robotic Exosuit” to have a cutting edge over the exoskeletons made by
Zelik, by enhancing the form, fit and function on its intended use via the
exoskeleton.
Reference
Boettner, B. (2017). Post-stroke
patients reach terra firma with Wyss Institute’s exosuit technology. Retrieved
and adapted from https://wyss.harvard.edu/news/post-stroke-patients-reach-terra-firma-with-wyss-exosuit-technology/
Boettner, B. (2019). Suit up
with a robot to walk AND run more easily. Retrieved and adapted from https://wyss.harvard.edu/news/suit-up-with-a-robot-to-walk-and-run-more-easily/
Coldewey, D. (2019). These
robo-shorts are the precursor to a true soft exoskeleton. Retrieved and
adapted from https://techcrunch.com/2019/08/15/these-robo-shorts-are-the-precursor-to-a-true-soft-exoskeleton/
Husseini, T. (2019). US Army
trials exoskeletons for military use. Retrieved and adapted from https://www.army-technology.com/features/us-army-exoskeletons/
Wyss Institute. (n.d.). Soft
Exosuits for Lower Extremity Mobility. Retrieved and adapted from
Zelik, K. (2019). It's 2019 -
where’s my super suit. Retrieved and adapted from https://theconversation.com/its-2019-wheres-my-supersuit-115679
Dear Kai Chuan,
ReplyDeleteYour draft #2 looks good. It is fluent and well researched. I would suggest though that you in your summary before the thesis you explain what the one application for the exoskeleton from MIT is and why that is limited/limiting. The thesis that follows needs a very specific focus in terms of your evaluative opinion.
Your thesis at present is too general; it should be made more specific in terms of the teams’ institutions and their apps: Team of researchers from other institutes have created products that have more applications.
Your supporting body paragraphs could then set with more specific topic sentences at the start of each. Your essay currently has lots of relevant info in the body paragraphs, but I’d like to see how you could (re)organize this info according to each application’s functional aspect.
Imagine a topic sentence such as this:
Other research and development teams have developed an application for rehabilitation, which does X (explain this)
Remember that each topic sentence needs to be aligned with your thesis.
You also need to cite every source. You’ve written Based on the Wyss Institute website, the “Soft Robotic Exosuit” . But that doesn’t work.
I hope this info helps you.
Best regards,
Brad